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April 18, 2008

Alright, here's a little poetry thing I was reading around and found. I'm not sure the purpose of it other than to just write, but I thought it would be interesting and might engage a few people. It would atleast give me more to respond to than just comments under my posts.

The first poster writes a haiku in form 5-7-5, and the responder writes a 7-7. This keep alternating in '5-7-5' - '7-7' - '5-7-5' until we stop. Roger that? Now I'll let the first person who posts a comment in here respond with one, whatever topic you want, and we, the audience will try to respond in a timely manner and keep the ball rolling. First post first served, so if, by some miracle, this thread ever sees more than 1 active person at a time trying to post, just check your post and if it accidentally has someone cut in front of it, just fix your post.

Try to keep responses on topic.. if there *is* a topic.

 Set. Go.

Keywords: crewriting, haiku

Posted by Brandon R. @ crewriting


Comments

  1. OK I Challange you

    five seven five is what we'll do

    this form is haiku

    Jeremiah H. on Monday, 28 April 2008, 09:14 MDT # |

  2. seven to seven that is me

    and so we shall alternate

    Jeremiah H. on Monday, 28 April 2008, 09:19 MDT # |

  3. rhyming is over

    so, too, dies the gradeschool antics

    unwanted and gone

    Brandon R. on Tuesday, 29 April 2008, 22:11 MDT # |

  4. There's a time and place for words

    that match.  Be they sticks, light them  

    Donna S. on Monday, 5 May 2008, 14:48 MDT # |

  5. A match may flare. Bright,

    brilliant in its angry death.

    Not my cup of tea.

     

    Brandon R. on Thursday, 8 May 2008, 18:40 MDT # |

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