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October 02, 2007

Would you be mad if I said I don't want to be your friend

If I told you you're mean and selfish

that your hard to be around

If I said you were a bully

that your cruel

would you be mad?

because you truely are

 

I wrote this because I kind of hard to. I like the poem though I thought it was stupid when I started it. It's amazing when what to thought changes when after you reread what you wrote later on.  I posted this because it the only poem I've writen in my notebook for advisory.

Keywords: Mad, you

Posted by Amilia G. @ Advisory Writing


Comments

  1. I love this.  Maybe you can stand up to the person you're talking about here.  Sounds like you don't need them in your life.

    Donna S. on Tuesday, 2 October 2007, 10:26 MDT # |

  2. Thanks for adding to this Amilia.  I appreciate the background and love that you give mention to the fact that writing is transformative.  The act of writing changes a person and it's interesting to go back and revisit old stuff to see how our perceptions change.

    Wonderful! 

    Donna S. on Thursday, 4 October 2007, 10:39 MDT # |

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