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February 18, 2009

Imagine

 

Lying there day by day

Doing nothing

Starring, eyes slightly open

But open to what?

Blankness, more of this word called 'nothing'

Hard to sleep

Hard to dream

The only time for my mind to be distracted

Yet I imagine the same every night

Tubes leading in

Tubes leading out

A cold room

Eyes locked on the center

Ears open but I only hear what  I want

Clock tends to move fast, but body moves s l o w

I pray for something new. . .

I'm sure we all do

They say to give is better than to receive

Well here I am arms open on my knees begging to give

Give my legs, to walk

Give my voice, to talk

Give my lungs, to breathe

No one would want to be in his shoes

Yet here I am willing  to trade it all

 

 

* I love you paul. . .

Posted by Veronica


Comments

  1. Wow.... I absolutely loved it, both when you read it in Governance here now where all can see. It's a very powerful piece, giving me vivid images of the tubes, the half open eyes, everything! But the imagry isn't what made this poem so amazing to me, its the feeling you put into it; making me feel what you do. Putting words in italics, and underlining 'nothing' made it all the more powerful by emphizing those few words.

    You're a very good writer, I hope to see some more of your writing around the site.

    Sandy P. on Wednesday, 18 February 2009, 10:22 MST # |

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