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April 30, 2008

They called you strong

You called me weak

They said you're tough

You said I'm meek

But you wont cry In ront of me

You show no pain Or empathy

You put up walls You push away

You wont say help Or say please stay

You look at me You say you're fine

But I can see I'm not blind

Your smile is fake And so is your laugh

You look through me You look right past

You cant say now I need you

If you think its wrong When I do

So dont come near Dont look right past

Dont smile at me Or fake your laugh

They called you strong

I call you weak

They said your though

I say you're meek

'cause you wont cry In front of me

You show no pain, No empathy...

Keywords: Fake

Posted by Moriah S. @ Community of Writers

I'm liking this peice...It has a really cool feeling to it and its like i can really picture someone saying all these things and also picture a situation for every line in the writing. It sounds really familular though. This was posted a while ago though. Did you maybe read this during one of the Governance's maybe? Anyways, i really like this one. I think it shows how someone kind of gets over/past someone else that they feel strongly for or something like that simply by realizing the things that they can find wrong or not true about them.

Shane on Tuesday, 9 December 2008, 22:01 MST # |
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