Comments

1. As usual - your poetry is vivid and fresh.  I'm so glad to see it and to see you let go some of those happenings of the mind.  I've heard it said that sometimes the mind can be like a bad neighborhood.  It's hard to find your way through the twisting streets and into safer territory.  Seems to me, one can always turn to writing to start their journey out. 

   Donna S. on Monday, 5 May 2008, 08:26 MDT # |

2. I like how you describe everything in your writing. "This is the scream of an abbusive drunk playing the piano with a little girl's face" It definitely gets the message across without saying anything too terrible. It's kinda weird. It's like you are actually describing what all is happening and it is terrible dont get me wrong, but it just sounds so much cleaner than something like, "he beat her face in" or something like that. Ya know? lol. I'm liking the word choice too. "...sick crimson when it dances on your blade...". It's kind of a good wake up call to all the stuff that people write that is just so...idk. Not like this...(and that is a good thing that your writing is this way). The end! LOVE IT! How, all that was just a description of something less scary than something else. I'm gonna have to agree with Donna on this one in saying that it is really fresh and edgy.

   Shane on Monday, 8 December 2008, 18:21 MST # |

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   Guest on Friday, 13 March 2009, 08:00 MDT # |